01-13-2016, 01:23 PM
I think I agree with you about the punctuation here, I just always write with it. This one would be better stylistically without it, though.
I like harmony because it adds another element about sound, their musical harmony rises above the street noise as well as them being physically above it. I do agree it is a common word in poems like this, but I like the way I use it. Of course, as Ray said, you would never really hear three birds singing together except in a Disney movie, so I don't know if that part actually works; but I like it anyway.
I like harmony because it adds another element about sound, their musical harmony rises above the street noise as well as them being physically above it. I do agree it is a common word in poems like this, but I like the way I use it. Of course, as Ray said, you would never really hear three birds singing together except in a Disney movie, so I don't know if that part actually works; but I like it anyway.