01-16-2016, 04:35 AM
The use of fragments and incomplete sentences fully drives home to idea of inconsistency and the jagged conduct of teenagers. I love how the poem backs up what it's really talking about with the structure of it. The meter is inconsistent as well but again, that just brings the feeling of irrational changes, quick motions. The diction (word choice) also gave the air of being sharp and quick. The repeated usage of words starting with or containing the letter s and f helped with the overall tone of the poem. Despite it's initial feeling of inconsistency, it's actually quite consistent by being inconsistent. I really like it.