Teen Spirit

Teen Spirit

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01-19-2016, 01:41 PM

The poem maintains its form until the last stanza. Good idea overall though and definitely something to be amazing when improved, but it will need some editing! P.S I'm not sure if it was a mistake or not, but I would include "the" in "riding drunk on highway".

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Teen Spirit - by PoetCraft - 01-06-2016, 01:00 PM

RE: Teen Spirit - by will - 01-06-2016, 05:01 PM

RE: Teen Spirit - by Achebe - 01-06-2016, 07:09 PM

RE: Teen Spirit - by The anti-anthropocentrist - 01-08-2016, 09:39 PM

RE: Teen Spirit - by kreichert - 01-15-2016, 11:50 PM

RE: Teen Spirit - by abbigailpaige - 01-16-2016, 04:35 AM

RE: Teen Spirit - by ClaytonDaury - 01-19-2016, 01:41 PM

RE: Teen Spirit - by Erthona - 01-19-2016, 03:38 PM

RE: Teen Spirit - by billy - 01-19-2016, 03:52 PM

RE: Teen Spirit - by CarrieChristo - 01-20-2016, 11:49 AM

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