Teen Spirit

[billy]

as the reader i'm fighting every line to know what's going on. an example is the first line; is riot a person? or [a riot]? stitch it together, remove the cliche and then go from there

Teen Spirit

Silently riot breaks out after the sunset,
Every control signal searched & destroyed. what control signals, show us
It's fun, riding drunk on highway, so are you drunk on the highway or having sex with a drunk on the highway?
Wave wild with flickering lights.

Softly whispers so prententious shady breeze,
Sigh so contagious self-assured living deads. 
Come on, turn the world upside down,
Or all the tides gotta drown you out.

Light up your fire, set the night on fire, cliche and a doors line
Recklessly burn through our poor dark age.
Shine no shame, as a blooming Lotus,
In proud stand out of muddy swamps.