The Scorpio

[LukeSizemore]

Are you ready for a risk
If you dare steak a kiss
Beware of the scorpio
Of mysterious allure

Magnetic in attraction
Confident and secure Confident, secure
Holding her head high Head high with pride
with pride Insert line

she draws them in with penetrating eyes Drawing them in with.. (Keeping everything in same tense)
eyes that blaze with intensity

mysterious mind with secrets to unfold
Behind her eyes lay a deep wild sea of emotion
full of passion and desire

someone who is willing Willing to fight
to fight  Fire with fire.
fire with fire

an enemy to beware
never forgets a sight
can be cruel but we don't care
beware of the scorpio sting

Just a few changes I would make. Not an expert by any means, though.