01-29-2016, 12:05 AM
To echo what everyone else has said, eliminate words. Thats the mistake I made, being far too emotionally connected to all of the words in my poem than I needed to be 
Brevity is the soul of wit, they say. So we must learn brevity, no matter how awkward it may feel.
Brevity is the soul of wit, they say. So we must learn brevity, no matter how awkward it may feel.