The Scorpio

[corey3236]

Are you ready for a risk
If you dare steak a kiss
Beware of the scorpio
Of mysterious allure

Magnetic in attraction
Confident and secure
Holding her head high
with pride

she draws them in with penetrating eyes
eyes that blaze with intensity

mysterious mind with secrets to unfold
Behind her eyes lay a deep wild sea of emotion
full of passion and desire

someone who is willing
to fight
fire with fire

an enemy to beware
never forgets a sight
can be cruel but we don't care
beware of the scorpio sting

Woah! I just joined this site and have been looking for good poems worth reading for me to give feedback on and I'm glad I finally found one. This is great. I feel like, to me personally, it really captures the essences of what it means to be a scorpio. Especially in your first (stanza?) where you point out the mysteriousness of a scorpio person and their alluring eyes that sort of draws you into wanting to know them. In the second stanza, you show how even when we build up the courage to talk to the captivating scorpio, we are blown away by their pride and they will shut us down if we are not ready. This poem perfectly captivated my perception on scorpios.