Words
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I'm really unclear on what the message is supposed to be, I thint that wold be the best place to start. There were some words that seemed like they were thrown in there completely at random ("words, always", "love", "hatred"). I actually do like the line about the music holding you but I would find a more poetic way of saying it.
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Words - by DC Black - 03-16-2016, 09:40 PM
RE: Words - by UselessBlueprint - 03-17-2016, 12:00 AM
RE: Words - by Winter.Rain - 03-17-2016, 03:04 AM
RE: Words - by DC Black - 03-17-2016, 07:11 AM
RE: Words - by shemthepenman - 03-17-2016, 09:32 AM
RE: Words - by QDeathstar - 03-18-2016, 06:33 AM
RE: Words - by DC Black - 03-18-2016, 09:35 AM
RE: Words - by rocky20 - 03-19-2016, 11:36 AM
RE: Words - by The Raven - 03-20-2016, 10:26 AM
RE: Words - by Bunx - 03-22-2016, 01:56 AM
RE: Words - by Julius - 03-23-2016, 03:51 AM
RE: Words - by (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ - 04-04-2016, 11:34 AM
RE: Words - by jeh - 04-08-2016, 09:17 AM
RE: Words - by DC Black - 04-09-2016, 08:57 AM
RE: Words - by bluerain_ - 04-12-2016, 11:34 AM
RE: Words - by babymonkey - 04-13-2016, 08:17 AM
RE: Words - by seastar3949 - 04-13-2016, 02:40 PM



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