03-17-2016, 03:04 AM 
	
	
	
		I'm really unclear on what the message is supposed to be, I thint that wold be the best place to start. There were some words that seemed like they were thrown in there completely at random ("words, always", "love", "hatred"). I actually do like the line about the music holding you but I would find a more poetic way of saying it.
	
	
	
	

