Words

[DC Black]

Thanks to both of you for taking the time to read and comment, that has made my day! Is it wrong to be giddy over Uselessblueprint liking a line? This is my first attempt at poetry, ever and I have come here to learn, already I have found that abstract themes are frowned upon in modern poetry so that was a good lesson in itself, I have no argument with anything you have both said. If either of you can bear to reviiew would this be better?
And Bowie tunes blaring loud,
holding me so tight
reminding me of stardust days.