03-18-2016, 06:33 AM
I don't know. I really like this. It's line breaks are perfect for me. It grabs my attention. I think there are a few major problems though that have skewed some critics view of the piece.
The title is generic and boring. And redundant. It makes me sigh when I read it... And frankly I felt regret having clicked the link to a poem entitled Words. Make it something more meaningful. Titles are important.
Secondly the poem starts strong and steadily weakens. The first few lines l, even the one word ones which some people take issue with, are perfect for me... But after that it sort of stumbles into cliche.
The title is generic and boring. And redundant. It makes me sigh when I read it... And frankly I felt regret having clicked the link to a poem entitled Words. Make it something more meaningful. Titles are important.
Secondly the poem starts strong and steadily weakens. The first few lines l, even the one word ones which some people take issue with, are perfect for me... But after that it sort of stumbles into cliche.