03-19-2016, 11:36 AM
Nicely done! I like the lyric quality of the piece and the mystery of it's meaning, leaving the poem open to easy interpretation to the reader.
However, I get stuck on the word "bind" in the first line. What are you bound to and how do all of the pieces fit? Or are they supposed to fit? The piece does have a little bit of a anxious feeling and hopefully that was on purpose: not knowing what or why exactly grounds us to place, a time? The poem made me think, and that in my mind is one of the beauties of poetry, so thank you!
However, I get stuck on the word "bind" in the first line. What are you bound to and how do all of the pieces fit? Or are they supposed to fit? The piece does have a little bit of a anxious feeling and hopefully that was on purpose: not knowing what or why exactly grounds us to place, a time? The poem made me think, and that in my mind is one of the beauties of poetry, so thank you!