03-19-2016, 08:39 PM
Thanks folks. I only have time to address part of this for now. Achebe are you talking about simply punctuation? to me this sentence reads okay as a sentence from a peom when I punctuate it correctly:
Inside there are others, they welcome their guest. And in joyous refrain, he takes up with the rest. To the chorus, this choir, will offer their lives, for no more's the Night Mountain when morning arrives...
Inside there are others, they welcome their guest. And in joyous refrain, he takes up with the rest. To the chorus, this choir, will offer their lives, for no more's the Night Mountain when morning arrives...