03-20-2016, 07:36 AM
Thanks Leanne - I can hear the trochee now, Maybe 'rough pallet'' instead of 'cold bed feel' would do it?
Murmur of the waves - murmurs of the waves? Either. But yes, 'murmurs' sounds better there.
No, it's only called 'dew' here because I could! Left-over rain doesn't sound good. Though it may have been dew, and guttation, too.
Murmur of the waves - murmurs of the waves? Either. But yes, 'murmurs' sounds better there.
No, it's only called 'dew' here because I could! Left-over rain doesn't sound good. Though it may have been dew, and guttation, too.