The real monsters.
#2
(03-28-2016, 09:24 AM)Mr.Malicious Wrote:  They hide
Under the bed
In the closet
For fear that the real monsters (Take away the word "that")
Will turn on the light.

I like the end, but the beginning could be improved if you elaborated more. Content wise, this might be one you want to rhyme. Imagine a dark version of Dr. Seuss or Tim Burton's short film Vincent. Hope that helps.
Reply


Messages In This Thread
The real monsters. - by Mr.Malicious - 03-28-2016, 09:24 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Acephale - 03-29-2016, 10:58 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by UselessBlueprint - 03-29-2016, 02:17 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by Mr.Malicious - 03-29-2016, 04:55 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by ellajam - 03-29-2016, 08:33 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by egr - 03-31-2016, 11:02 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by KingPoetry - 04-03-2016, 03:19 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Bucca - 04-06-2016, 02:00 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by mpilting - 04-06-2016, 03:43 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Bunx - 04-07-2016, 02:14 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by jeh - 04-08-2016, 09:02 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by timg516 - 04-09-2016, 06:03 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Humphrey - 04-19-2016, 12:38 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by Quixilated - 04-28-2016, 05:59 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by humility - 04-30-2016, 06:02 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Sarah Luu - 05-14-2016, 07:08 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by psychonaut - 05-15-2016, 01:25 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Taivey - 05-15-2016, 02:45 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by QDeathstar - 05-18-2016, 01:02 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by Seanwd98 - 05-24-2016, 11:09 PM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!