03-29-2016, 10:58 AM
(03-28-2016, 09:24 AM)Mr.Malicious Wrote: They hide
Under the bed
In the closet
For fear that the real monsters (Take away the word "that")
Will turn on the light.
I like the end, but the beginning could be improved if you elaborated more. Content wise, this might be one you want to rhyme. Imagine a dark version of Dr. Seuss or Tim Burton's short film Vincent. Hope that helps.


