03-31-2016, 08:01 PM
(03-31-2016, 07:55 PM)ellajam Wrote:Thanks Ella. I went back and fixed the original too. Thrilled you still remember those Villes.(03-31-2016, 07:22 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:Done.(03-31-2016, 01:41 PM)billy Wrote: nicely done tiger; i too missed this one, i'm glad i got a chance to read it. so, any chance of suicide [a worthy choice]; not the suicide; the poemThanks Billy. He also had a small brass rat on his desk, but I could exact no meaning from it.![]()
Also, I have just noticed that shrinks should be shrink's. Whoops!
Paul![]()
Good choice, just as strong this time around. So many of yours hit me square on, though I have to say I have never fallen out of love with your pair of villes.

