04-05-2016, 08:33 AM
Hi QV! Okay, so I have to disclaim that I'm an amateur poet, who doesn't necessarily have insightful comments. However, I love the general feelings that you convey in your poem! I've felt the same about a person of interest :3 I agree with what everyone has said so far, especially with what billy suggested. I, myself, don't really know how to write poems and would like your critique of mine (which I'll be posting in a bit). Best of luck~ 
I am allowing this, but would ask you to try and be more specific in the future. Don't rely on what others have said - what do you think? Also, there is no obligation either explicit or implied for anyone to comment on your poem just because you comment on theirs/ admin
I am allowing this, but would ask you to try and be more specific in the future. Don't rely on what others have said - what do you think? Also, there is no obligation either explicit or implied for anyone to comment on your poem just because you comment on theirs/ admin