04-06-2016, 02:00 AM
I like where the poem was going. Personally I prefer poems that have a "timeless" feel to them, so the Donald Trump part is off-putting for me. B
Maybe elaborate on what "under the bed and in the closet" means. Is humanity hiding in there or is it waiting to pounce on the innocent child? Adding contrast to the innocent vs the monstrous humanity would help add imagery/bulk to the poem. Why should we be afraid or repulsed by it?
Maybe elaborate on what "under the bed and in the closet" means. Is humanity hiding in there or is it waiting to pounce on the innocent child? Adding contrast to the innocent vs the monstrous humanity would help add imagery/bulk to the poem. Why should we be afraid or repulsed by it?