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The real monsters.
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04-09-2016, 06:03 AM
I understand the premise but would be much better if it rhymed. The stage is set with this poem. Could go in a dark direction but bring out the monsters more. Kind of jumped different places and bringing out more of the poem would make it better sounding. You would go in depth a little more and I think this is what this poem needed. Just a little bit more detail. Thank you
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The real monsters. - by Mr.Malicious - 03-28-2016, 09:24 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Acephale - 03-29-2016, 10:58 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by UselessBlueprint - 03-29-2016, 02:17 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by Mr.Malicious - 03-29-2016, 04:55 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by ellajam - 03-29-2016, 08:33 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by egr - 03-31-2016, 11:02 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by KingPoetry - 04-03-2016, 03:19 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Bucca - 04-06-2016, 02:00 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by mpilting - 04-06-2016, 03:43 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Bunx - 04-07-2016, 02:14 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by jeh - 04-08-2016, 09:02 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by timg516 - 04-09-2016, 06:03 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Humphrey - 04-19-2016, 12:38 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by Quixilated - 04-28-2016, 05:59 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by humility - 04-30-2016, 06:02 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Sarah Luu - 05-14-2016, 07:08 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by psychonaut - 05-15-2016, 01:25 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by Taivey - 05-15-2016, 02:45 AM
RE: The real monsters. - by QDeathstar - 05-18-2016, 01:02 PM
RE: The real monsters. - by Seanwd98 - 05-24-2016, 11:09 PM
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