04-12-2016, 11:34 AM 
	
	
	
		Hello,
I like what you were trying to say. More punctuation could of been helpful. Love, and hatred should be combined. Other than those, I don't have anything to say. It's clear what you were saying. You had my attention.
Best of luck,
Danielle
	
	
	
I like what you were trying to say. More punctuation could of been helpful. Love, and hatred should be combined. Other than those, I don't have anything to say. It's clear what you were saying. You had my attention.
Best of luck,
Danielle

