04-24-2016, 12:22 PM 
	
	
	
		Leanne and Billy,
I really appreciate your thorough read and constructive critics. The feedback was very helpful and I was able to bring out the much stronger shape of my poem.
The most current update is added.
I am here to learn and polish my poetic skills so I would welcome any and all the feedback I can get.
Thank You All!
	
	
	
I really appreciate your thorough read and constructive critics. The feedback was very helpful and I was able to bring out the much stronger shape of my poem.
The most current update is added.
I am here to learn and polish my poetic skills so I would welcome any and all the feedback I can get.
Thank You All!

 

