04-27-2016, 12:04 PM
Hello!
I agree with the above comments, the beauty of this poem is largely due to its simplicity, and it should stay that way.
The only thing that threw me off was the word "don't". I may be wrong, but I would consider replacing it with "doesn't" or "won't". This feels more grammatically correct.
I might just be reading it wrong, but that was what stood out to me.
-s.a
I agree with the above comments, the beauty of this poem is largely due to its simplicity, and it should stay that way.
The only thing that threw me off was the word "don't". I may be wrong, but I would consider replacing it with "doesn't" or "won't". This feels more grammatically correct.
I might just be reading it wrong, but that was what stood out to me.
-s.a