The real monsters.

[psychonaut]

haha gotta love 2 poems about donald trump on a poetry website. The man certainly inspires. My 2 cents is that you can't just throw his name in at the end. You have to find a way to bring the reader there without telling them how or what to believe. I know I am just repeating the same comment as everyone else here, but I thought the original had a lot of potential and the re write seems although a little bit less ambiguous, it seems to directed now. Maybe somewhere in between?
Thank you for the read