05-27-2016, 05:00 PM 
	
	
	
		Joseph, thank you for your comments.
Like Kolemath, you seem to like the poem, but the many changes you suggest are an indication that I haven't written clearly. I pride myself on writing clearly, but apparently I'm not.
	
	
	
Like Kolemath, you seem to like the poem, but the many changes you suggest are an indication that I haven't written clearly. I pride myself on writing clearly, but apparently I'm not.

 

