Thoughts on Free Thought

[XavF]

I'm free to think and do as I please.
Unbound and freed by Socrates-
To live and dream and spread the word
Of lessons often left unheard. ( adding life here adds alliteration and also fits the tempo better. "Of life lessons, often left unheard"
For from within, one finds their peace.

I'm free to think and do as I please.
No walls or chains or locks or keys (perhaps locks and keys, just to change it up from or)
Can suffocate or dominate
My innate need to cogitate. (Why not use meditate, same amount of syllables and a lot clearer)
For from within, one finds their peace.

I'm free to think and do as I please.
Opposing vile tyrannies-
A call to all, though few will heed.
By my own will I intercede.
For from within, one finds their peace.

I won’t be bound by foreign will.
No rule so bold and brash and shrill
Shall box my precious sanctity
Of individuality.
By my own will I have found peace.

This is really quite good, it flows quite nicely once you build into it! thoughts in brackets above.