06-11-2016, 05:55 PM
Hello!
I agree with the previous reviewers...this needs more...visual texture and imagery . I think poetry is a great way to pour out feelings on paper--but then you have to kind of pat these thoughts into shapes other people can see.
Good luck-V
I agree with the previous reviewers...this needs more...visual texture and imagery . I think poetry is a great way to pour out feelings on paper--but then you have to kind of pat these thoughts into shapes other people can see.
Good luck-V