Hello, I´m new here and never done a critic before. I started writing poems (if what I write can actually be called poems 
) some months back and will appreciate some genuine feedback/critic.
Concerning the peom above, I do see rhyming and a good work of art. One can appreciate the piece without seeking to know a deeper meaning. What I do find disturbing though is the use of to many "reds". But what do I know. There are many genres of poems!
Hi, welcome to the Pen. If you'd like to read some critique tips you'll find them in the Important Threads of this forum. ella/mod
) some months back and will appreciate some genuine feedback/critic.Concerning the peom above, I do see rhyming and a good work of art. One can appreciate the piece without seeking to know a deeper meaning. What I do find disturbing though is the use of to many "reds". But what do I know. There are many genres of poems!
Hi, welcome to the Pen. If you'd like to read some critique tips you'll find them in the Important Threads of this forum. ella/mod