06-27-2016, 10:43 AM
I just registered so pardon my poor critique, but I'll do my best:
I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme and there was a definite rhythm I picked up on (not sure if it's as the same in your head, but I myself enjoyed it cx )
I really liked the freeing theme yet there was still a feeling of imprisonment to me, and I liked it.
All in all, really great job!
-AshimZed
I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme and there was a definite rhythm I picked up on (not sure if it's as the same in your head, but I myself enjoyed it cx )
I really liked the freeing theme yet there was still a feeling of imprisonment to me, and I liked it.
All in all, really great job!
-AshimZed