06-28-2016, 02:33 AM
Not really a critique but a comment..
To me, ganbaru seems central to this piece but although you define it, for some reason I feel like the actual meaning is different than the words you scattered, from them I get 'be stubborn" but maybe you mean "be persistent" but your words aren't clear...
To me, ganbaru seems central to this piece but although you define it, for some reason I feel like the actual meaning is different than the words you scattered, from them I get 'be stubborn" but maybe you mean "be persistent" but your words aren't clear...