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07-13-2016, 08:52 AM

(07-13-2016, 08:41 AM)Achebe Wrote:
(07-13-2016, 08:17 AM)rowens Wrote: Demonic sacrifices, the waste product resurfaces in the mind.
Baal wasn't a demon. He was a great Phoenician god.
Jehovah = jealous tribal upstart.

We'll I mean if we're being technical Jehovah is a Tyndale Latin mashup of Yahweh and Adonai.

or in the translations the mashup of LORD and Lord.

Hmm Baal, I didn't realize that he was all the way back with the Phoenicians.

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when a friend asks for crit - by Lizzie - 07-12-2016, 09:22 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Quixilated - 07-12-2016, 10:08 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Lizzie - 07-12-2016, 10:39 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Quixilated - 07-12-2016, 10:43 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Lizzie - 07-12-2016, 11:43 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by billy - 07-12-2016, 11:10 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by RiverNotch - 07-12-2016, 03:03 PM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Achebe - 07-12-2016, 05:17 PM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Leanne - 07-12-2016, 06:25 PM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Todd - 07-12-2016, 08:48 PM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Lizzie - 07-13-2016, 02:25 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Leanne - 07-13-2016, 04:08 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by shemthepenman - 07-13-2016, 04:20 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Leanne - 07-13-2016, 04:23 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Achebe - 07-13-2016, 06:22 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by rowens - 07-13-2016, 05:35 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by rowens - 07-13-2016, 06:29 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Achebe - 07-13-2016, 07:16 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by rowens - 07-13-2016, 08:17 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Achebe - 07-13-2016, 08:41 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Todd - 07-13-2016, 08:52 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by RiverNotch - 07-13-2016, 07:31 PM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by rowens - 07-13-2016, 09:04 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Leanne - 07-13-2016, 09:16 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by rowens - 07-13-2016, 09:43 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by QDeathstar - 07-13-2016, 01:19 PM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Lizzie - 07-13-2016, 02:49 PM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by QDeathstar - 07-13-2016, 07:51 PM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Erthona - 07-14-2016, 06:10 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by cvanshelton - 07-18-2016, 09:33 AM

RE: when a friend asks for crit - by Lizzie - 07-15-2016, 03:50 PM

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