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[ellajam]

Hi everyone,

I'm amejadcc, a pen name I had since 12 years of age.
My class told me my creative non-fictions have a poetic feel when I submit them in class.
I need to go to a poetry class I know, but I love how forums work so much that is why I am here.
I'm trying to write a poem where it is necessary to remove all the excess words and conjunctions.
I hope I can progress from here on.

Thanks for having me.

Welcome to the Pen. All we we ask is that you be an active participant and attempt to give as much as you receive. Good job on your first crit, just remember that suggestions in critiques are not imposing your will or style on the OP, they just give an idea of your experience with the poem. If a change of word occurs to you there's no reason not to mention it, the OP has free will.