08-16-2016, 12:09 PM
Homage? That's weird -- as far as I know, they chant for sex, not power.
I'd reverse the actions, if I were you -- "sits" is such a boring action, while "croaks" seems to be the whole focus of the piece anyway. Say,
sitting on a stone,
the frog croaks
at the sinking moon
or something.
I'd reverse the actions, if I were you -- "sits" is such a boring action, while "croaks" seems to be the whole focus of the piece anyway. Say,
sitting on a stone,
the frog croaks
at the sinking moon
or something.