loaf on a box
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justlikeyou,

I don't write American Haiku, but I would think that should be obvious from the lack of form. Punctuated and put in proper sentence form it would read.

Cat likes pizza box for his bed.
(He)Assumes (the)loaf position.

But that was not my intention.

My intention was to create an image using the fewest words possibly and still convey all I wished to convey.

Thanks for reading and commenting,

Best,

dale
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entwife,

Yeah, you're the first one to mention that Smile

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Messages In This Thread
loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-16-2016, 05:51 AM
RE: loaf on a box - by just mercedes - 08-16-2016, 07:57 AM
RE: loaf on a box - by RiverNotch - 08-16-2016, 12:05 PM
RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-16-2016, 03:00 PM
RE: loaf on a box - by billy - 08-16-2016, 04:51 PM
RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-17-2016, 04:51 AM
RE: loaf on a box - by UselessBlueprint - 08-17-2016, 12:08 PM
RE: loaf on a box - by ellajam - 08-17-2016, 06:31 AM
RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-17-2016, 11:00 AM
RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-18-2016, 03:18 AM
RE: loaf on a box - by Lizzie - 08-18-2016, 12:28 PM
RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-18-2016, 03:11 PM
RE: loaf on a box - by justlikeyou - 08-20-2016, 06:05 AM
RE: loaf on a box - by Erthona - 08-20-2016, 11:29 AM



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