10-03-2016, 12:05 PM
Thanks for the responses.
kolemath: I do hope that's the only bit that feels a little over-much.
Achebe: This is the second of three in a series, actually -- the third was the first I posted. I'm not really sure if the first is any good, just as I wasn't sure if this was any good, this read too simple -- I'll post it once an equivalent amount of time has passed.
Again, thanks!
kolemath: I do hope that's the only bit that feels a little over-much.
Achebe: This is the second of three in a series, actually -- the third was the first I posted. I'm not really sure if the first is any good, just as I wasn't sure if this was any good, this read too simple -- I'll post it once an equivalent amount of time has passed.
Again, thanks!

