Fade

[kolemath]

going blind?

I tried to picture Christmastime
with snow and nuts and fire,
from grandma knitting patterned lines
to door knocks from the choir. quaint verse

It’s awful tough to visualize, grammar says period here; you say what you please
I pray because the sun
sprays red upon my fastened eyes fastened eyes is great
and makes my senses run. senses run is good too; so the speaker is too overwhelmed with present sensation to recall memories

why pray? why christmas? any memory could be inserted into S1, so i'm not sure how a memory of christmas is supposed to influence the interpretation of S2.

thanks for posting