10-19-2016, 09:59 AM 
	
	
	
		Thanks for all the comments and suggestions, but there is a question: the poem was deliberately written to be old fashioned so what's important to me is does it hang together and are tone and style consistent?  One critic evinced a dislike for being lectured to. Wouldn't that shut out a great number of poems by those did and do lecture?
	
	
	
	

 

 
