10-26-2016, 11:46 PM
Hey, Madeline thank you for looking over my poem and giving some good critique. The parents was actually just the title it is not part of the poem. I shouldn't have left it like that. Also, thank you for commenting on my semi colon. I knew when as I was writing this couldn't be right but I kept it in to see what happens. As for the ending I will see what others say. Whether it makes since or not, I may be able to strengthen it anyway. Thanks again for the critq, I appreciate you taking time out to read. I will probobly do a quick first edit to fix the title thing and my basic grammar issues. Thank you!