Psychasthenia
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(10-26-2016, 11:55 PM)71degrees Wrote:  I thought I should put this here.  If interested, it might help some of you with suggestions.  Sorry, I can't figure out any other way to insert what I want.  

http://www.vettriano-art.com/the-letter/

Madeline:  I like the modifier suggestion about the window.  Thanks.  Glad you think it's a lovely poem. The painting sure is.  I adore anything by Vettriano.

Kolemath: The "weird" omniscient comment is valid since I'm looking at a painting. Tells me it's working. Thanks.  Also appreciate some of the grammatical things.
weird is good Thumbsup i didn't gather a 3rd person painting though, should maybe put the painting title as a epigraph?
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Psychasthenia - by 71degrees - 10-26-2016, 03:43 AM
RE: Psychasthenia - by kolemath - 10-26-2016, 07:05 AM
RE: Psychasthenia - by Alic Elliot - 10-26-2016, 03:56 PM
RE: Psychasthenia - by MadelineAnne - 10-26-2016, 05:43 PM
RE: Psychasthenia - by 71degrees - 10-26-2016, 11:55 PM
RE: Psychasthenia - by kolemath - 10-27-2016, 12:05 AM



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