Free Standing
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(10-30-2016, 04:20 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:  Is this one of a series? The only part I do not like is 'enjoying only yourself' because she looks lonely, biting her cheek,crossing legs anxiously, if she is enjoying herself, the rest doesn't make sense.  It sounds like the writer is lonely, projecting... being alone not lonely,
Curious as to why you would ask about a series...is there something here that might indicate that? If the N. is sounding like the lonely one, you might be onto something Wink

Thanks for commenting. Appreciate your thoughts.
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Free Standing - by 71degrees - 10-29-2016, 11:30 PM
RE: Free Standing - by CRNDLSM - 10-30-2016, 04:20 AM
RE: Free Standing - by 71degrees - 10-30-2016, 06:09 AM
RE: Free Standing - by Achebe - 10-30-2016, 07:27 PM
RE: Free Standing - by 71degrees - 10-31-2016, 11:40 AM
RE: Free Standing - by Lizzie - 10-31-2016, 01:10 AM



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