Free Standing
#4
S1 and S2 are sprinkled with interesting detail, such as six items or less and biting the inside of the cheek.
Not sure why it's not ok to feel ok in S3 though 

Perhaps better to leave out the authorial intrusion and carry on the observation for one more strophe.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Free Standing - by 71degrees - 10-29-2016, 11:30 PM
RE: Free Standing - by CRNDLSM - 10-30-2016, 04:20 AM
RE: Free Standing - by 71degrees - 10-30-2016, 06:09 AM
RE: Free Standing - by Achebe - 10-30-2016, 07:27 PM
RE: Free Standing - by 71degrees - 10-31-2016, 11:40 AM
RE: Free Standing - by Lizzie - 10-31-2016, 01:10 AM



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