Say Something by Kolemath
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Say Something

I wrote a verse
then erased it.

Here it is. 



                                       Do you like it?
                                       The silence?  The purity of space?

                                       The blather doesn't blah-blah
                                       the space of what you say.





The original thread and comments can be found here

*Note from Admin: This poem was originally posted in the "For Fun" forum, and the comments were delivered in the spirit of fun; however, this is a poem to which I have returned numerous times and each time the effect has been different.  

Sometimes, we just can't predict what's going to work for us.  This works, and I know I'm not alone in thinking that.  Cheers Kolemath! ~ Leanne
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Say Something by Kolemath - by Leanne - 11-09-2016, 05:14 AM
RE: Say Something by Kolemath - by Todd - 11-09-2016, 05:36 AM
RE: Say Something by Kolemath - by Lizzie - 11-09-2016, 05:41 AM
RE: Say Something by Kolemath - by ellajam - 11-09-2016, 05:54 AM
RE: Say Something by Kolemath - by just mercedes - 11-09-2016, 07:26 AM
RE: Say Something by Kolemath - by QDeathstar - 11-09-2016, 09:35 AM
RE: Say Something by Kolemath - by kolemath - 11-09-2016, 09:43 AM



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