Say Something by Kolemath

[kolemath]

Say Something

I wrote a verse
then erased it.

Here it is. 



                                       Do you like it?
                                       The silence?  The purity of space?

                                       The blather doesn't blah-blah
                                       the space of what you say.





The original thread and comments can be found here

*Note from Admin: This poem was originally posted in the "For Fun" forum, and the comments were delivered in the spirit of fun; however, this is a poem to which I have returned numerous times and each time the effect has been different.  

Sometimes, we just can't predict what's going to work for us.  This works, and I know I'm not alone in thinking that.  Cheers Kolemath! ~ Leanne

even if billy says his muse is gone, he can still bemuse a poem.    
http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-19569.html :D


thanks for the spotlight, leanne! it will be listed with other achievements in my obituary