Water and Sky (Thread Closed)

[mv5543]

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Hi, I would love to hear some feedback about my poem. Thanks. 

Water and Sky

Once I stood on the top of a tide. 
Since I was so high, it seemed fine to shut my eyes.

Then I reached out my hand to touch the sky.  
Air slipped through my fingers, so I opened my eyes.

I glanced below, and saw no tide.
I was cornered by shallow water on every side. 

From now on, I will not shut my eyes.
I look for deep waters, but don’t know where they lie.