12-15-2016, 02:08 AM
Hi all,
I've been trying to turn the angst of fatherhood into some humorous poetry... hopefully. Still very novice, but please feel free to hammer on this. I'd appreciate the feedback/thoughts.
LOVE AND PUKE
Warm and wet
I hear the splatter
But I'm too numb
For it to matter
Wetness spreads across my chest
Drips that haven't come to rest
I wipe your tears
I feel your slime
For you
I'll be here every time
Plaintive eyes and burning head
Abandon thoughts of sleep and bed
No more wondering if you're sick
I hug you close
And feel us stick
I've been trying to turn the angst of fatherhood into some humorous poetry... hopefully. Still very novice, but please feel free to hammer on this. I'd appreciate the feedback/thoughts.
LOVE AND PUKE
Warm and wet
I hear the splatter
But I'm too numb
For it to matter
Wetness spreads across my chest
Drips that haven't come to rest
I wipe your tears
I feel your slime
For you
I'll be here every time
Plaintive eyes and burning head
Abandon thoughts of sleep and bed
No more wondering if you're sick
I hug you close
And feel us stick