Here Again
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Lots of great imagery creating here that sticks in the brain

(11-24-2016, 10:07 AM)Coquette16 Wrote:  How am I here again?
To the place where fire
burns from cold, ashen embers  I like the image that heat or warmth here symbolises life and activity which is further emphasised in the next stanza

As unexpected as a bolt of lightning;
Electrifying
what has gone to the grave This line about the grave confuses me a bit but also intrigues - does it refer to the things you have let go but come back as a bolt of lightning?

Unearthed from beneath
a current of questions,
of possibilities,
of melting and bending
faith’s pillar Perhaps my favourite stanza of the whole poem a lot of naturalistic imagery to a very human problem

All, for what?
For torture of the soul?
Self-pity?
For weeping as a willow
reaches downward
to meet the earth?
For floundering as a fish
searching in circles? Love the image of willow and fish to very strong images

Back to where I began.
How am I here again? Strong ending







**Thanks for reading/critiquing!**
Poetry is the unexpected utterance of the soul 

Mark Nepo
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Messages In This Thread
Here Again - by Coquette16 - 11-24-2016, 10:07 AM
RE: Here Again - by UselessBlueprint - 11-24-2016, 10:41 AM
RE: Here Again - by Jo Frumple - 11-26-2016, 09:06 AM
RE: Here Again - by HaleINthewind - 11-30-2016, 03:02 PM
RE: Here Again - by Emmykay - 12-26-2016, 11:35 AM
RE: Here Again - by Mark Cecil - 12-28-2016, 06:51 AM
RE: Here Again - by Coquette16 - 01-03-2017, 06:44 AM
RE: Here Again - by VINTAGEM - 01-03-2017, 12:17 AM
RE: Here Again - by pbillyc - 03-06-2017, 10:21 PM



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