12-28-2016, 06:51 AM 
	
	
	
		Lots of great imagery creating here that sticks in the brain
	
	
(11-24-2016, 10:07 AM)Coquette16 Wrote: How am I here again?
To the place where fire
burns from cold, ashen embers I like the image that heat or warmth here symbolises life and activity which is further emphasised in the next stanza
As unexpected as a bolt of lightning;
Electrifying
what has gone to the grave This line about the grave confuses me a bit but also intrigues - does it refer to the things you have let go but come back as a bolt of lightning?
Unearthed from beneath
a current of questions,
of possibilities,
of melting and bending
faith’s pillar Perhaps my favourite stanza of the whole poem a lot of naturalistic imagery to a very human problem
All, for what?
For torture of the soul?
Self-pity?
For weeping as a willow
reaches downward
to meet the earth?
For floundering as a fish
searching in circles? Love the image of willow and fish to very strong images
Back to where I began.
How am I here again? Strong ending
**Thanks for reading/critiquing!**
Poetry is the unexpected utterance of the soul 
Mark Nepo
	
Mark Nepo

 

 
