Distrust (edit2, title chg)
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(01-01-2017, 07:42 AM)dukealien Wrote:  @everyone - Does the message still get through without the fourth line?  It seems to me that without some hint at context it fails to bite, like the famous Meiji/Showa
The association was obvious, but doesn't make for interesting  poetry.
Edited, it is less didactic, but still a statement of boring  opinion or prejudice. The old show / tell tgibg.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Distrust (edit2, title chg) - by dukealien - 12-30-2016, 05:37 AM
RE: Impediments - by Achebe - 12-30-2016, 04:15 PM
RE: Impediments - by Mahjong - 12-30-2016, 06:34 PM
RE: Impediments - by RiverNotch - 12-30-2016, 09:17 PM
RE: Race (edit, title change) - by dukealien - 01-01-2017, 07:42 AM
RE: Race (edit, title change) - by Achebe - 01-01-2017, 08:57 AM
RE: Race (edit, title change) - by Lizzie - 01-01-2017, 07:45 AM
RE: Distrust (edit2, title chg) - by dukealien - 01-03-2017, 01:59 AM



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