01-01-2017, 08:57 AM
(01-01-2017, 07:42 AM)dukealien Wrote: @everyone - Does the message still get through without the fourth line? It seems to me that without some hint at context it fails to bite, like the famous Meiji/ShowaThe association was obvious, but doesn't make for interesting poetry.
Edited, it is less didactic, but still a statement of boring opinion or prejudice. The old show / tell tgibg.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

