01-03-2017, 12:17 AM
The metaphors and similes used in this poem are great.The first stanza is beautifully written' ashen embers' is a contradiction that is well written.
The imagery in the second stanza however lost me totally I could not make sense of what it has anything to do with faith.
The closing of the poem is nice as it explains the consequence to the first stanza's except I feel the questions could have been poetically put for instance" For what?" sounds so informal and slang. It has the making of a good poem
The imagery in the second stanza however lost me totally I could not make sense of what it has anything to do with faith.
The closing of the poem is nice as it explains the consequence to the first stanza's except I feel the questions could have been poetically put for instance" For what?" sounds so informal and slang. It has the making of a good poem