01-04-2017, 10:33 AM
LOVE AND PUKE
Warm and wet
I hear the splatter
But I'm too numb
For it to matter
Wetness spreads across my chest
Drips that haven't come to rest
I wipe your tears
I feel your slime I understand why you use slime, but I don't think it fits in with the tone. I think a different word that conveys the same thing would work better.
For you
I'll be here every time
Plaintive eyes and burning head
Abandon thoughts of sleep and bed
No more wondering if you're sick
I hug you close
And feel us stick
Warm and wet
I hear the splatter
But I'm too numb
For it to matter
Wetness spreads across my chest
Drips that haven't come to rest
I wipe your tears
I feel your slime I understand why you use slime, but I don't think it fits in with the tone. I think a different word that conveys the same thing would work better.
For you
I'll be here every time
Plaintive eyes and burning head
Abandon thoughts of sleep and bed
No more wondering if you're sick
I hug you close
And feel us stick