Devolution

Devolution

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01-05-2017, 07:18 AM

There's nothing aside from arbitrary line breaks that makes this a poem. It tells. It sounds like the opening of a manifesto. It is lacking rythm. There is no rhyme. Narry a metaphor or simile. It's more like a saltine cracker than a poem.

But don't worry, the dark ages will come again, in the meantime learn to swim.

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Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-05-2017, 03:23 AM

RE: Devolution - by Achebe - 01-05-2017, 05:19 AM

RE: Devolution - by QDeathstar - 01-05-2017, 07:18 AM

RE: Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-05-2017, 07:30 AM

RE: Devolution - by Erthona - 01-05-2017, 09:05 AM

RE: Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-05-2017, 10:15 AM

RE: Devolution - by rollingbrianjones - 01-05-2017, 11:29 AM

RE: Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-07-2017, 10:46 AM

RE: Devolution - by Achebe - 01-06-2017, 06:19 AM

RE: Devolution - by rollingbrianjones - 01-07-2017, 11:03 AM