Interpretations

[Hkrodgers]

I like the language that has been used but struggling to understand exactly what the poem is about given there could be a number of interpretations the key words can have. My suggestion would be to either use more specific / descriptive wording or add an additional verse in the middle. Verse one opening with a thought, verse two ensuring the reader understands that thought and third with closing. I am new to this forum so I do hope this helps.