01-06-2017, 06:19 AM
The internal logic of the poem is better in the edited version.
The third stanza still brims over with adjectives like "incorruptible", "radical" and "great"'which are best avoided
The third stanza still brims over with adjectives like "incorruptible", "radical" and "great"'which are best avoided
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

